Britain’s Industrial Past

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  • Ken Rennie
    Ken Rennie
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    on: December 24, 2019 at 2:32 pm

    This is a Clyde tug lying on the bottom of the basin at the end of the Forth and Clyde Canal. The River Clyde was a major shipbuilding river as well as a trading centre for the West Indies and North America. Nowadays most of the shipyards are closed and the docks are gone. Ken DSF2214-as-Smart-Object-4

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    Kevin Raber
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    Re: Britain’s Industrial Past
    Reply #1 on: December 28, 2019 at 10:01 pm

    Nice image Ken.  The sunken boat competes with the bright sky.  Have you thought of toning down the highlights and maybe opening the shadows on the boat?  there looks to be more detail there in the shadow area.  My eye just keeps going back to the bright sky.  Give it a shot if you have time.

    Kevin Raber
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    Mike Nelson Pedde
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    Reply #2 on: January 3, 2020 at 7:18 pm

    I agree with Kevin. Nicely done, but maybe a little more work. Overall the image is quite dark, and the eye tends to be drawn to bright things.

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