icy curve

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  • Jeremy Roussak
    Jeremy Roussak
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    on: June 18, 2020 at 11:31 am

    Thoughts?

    pxl-3

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    Mike Nelson Pedde
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    Re: icy curve
    Reply #1 on: June 22, 2020 at 4:35 pm

    Hmmm… Overall I like the flow in the image, the textures and the range of tones, but I feel that big lump at the bottom stops me from stepping into the frame. I have to move around it to get by and explore the rest of the image, but it’s so prominent and right in front that I keep getting pulled back to it.

    My $0.02

    Mike.

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    Jeremy Roussak
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    Re: icy curve
    Reply #2 on: June 24, 2020 at 1:45 pm

    I’ll see what I can do, Mike. My PS skills are not great, however.

    Jeremy

    Jeremy Roussak
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    Re: icy curve
    Reply #3 on: June 24, 2020 at 5:24 pm

    Another go.

    pxl-4

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    Re: icy curve
    Reply #4 on: June 25, 2020 at 2:29 pm

    Or, better I think, thispxl-5

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    Mike Nelson Pedde
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    Re: icy curve
    Reply #5 on: June 26, 2020 at 9:26 pm

    Yes. Much cleaner. Draws you in.

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