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  • Jeremy Roussak
    Jeremy Roussak
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    Landscape & Nature Photography
    on: August 7, 2020 at 1:29 pm

    Comments?

    pxl-1

    Jeremy

    Mike Nelson Pedde
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    Re: fluff
    Reply #1 on: August 7, 2020 at 6:42 pm

    Overall, I like it. My only quibble is that the seed heads, dead centre, bottom of frame are OOF. Their location makes them one of the dominant features of the image, but being OOF they’re more of a distraction than an element of the image.

    My 2¢.

    Mike.

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    Jeremy Roussak
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    Re: fluff
    Reply #2 on: August 13, 2020 at 1:19 pm

    Fair point, Mike. I’ve been back (and been heavily bitten for my pains) to try some focus stacking, but I’ve not managed to re-create the tonalities of this shot, which are what draws me to it. I’ve compromised by a little burning. Better?

    pxl-2

    Jeremy

    Mike Nelson Pedde
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    Re: fluff
    Reply #3 on: August 13, 2020 at 3:55 pm

    In my opinion, yes. 👏

    Mike.

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    Christopher Sanderson
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    Re: fluff
    Reply #4 on: August 14, 2020 at 10:27 am

    That makes a big improvement. Now a very enjoyable photograph thanks to good constructive criticism.

    Kevin Raber
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    Re: fluff
    Reply #5 on: August 14, 2020 at 6:20 pm

    I agree little things make a big difference.

    Kevin Raber
    Owner and Publisher of photoPXL

    Jeremy Roussak
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    Re: fluff
    Reply #6 on: August 26, 2020 at 7:14 pm

    That makes a big improvement. Now a very enjoyable photograph thanks to good constructive criticism.

    Yes indeed. That’s why I post!

    Jeremy

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