AuthorTopic: curve Read 43 Times
ParticipantPosts: 15Re: curveReply #1 on: September 5, 2020 at 5:39 pm
nice shot. I have to say though it took me a few seconds to find the “curve” as per the title. Maybe there is a bit too much going on? Perhaps try to crop the top half – the greyish background seems to take up a lot if space…?
or maybe change the main subject to the iceberg with the cracked surface and re-crop for that. This seems to be natural focal point.
Just some thoughts…
ParticipantPosts: 15Re: curveReply #2 on: September 5, 2020 at 8:04 pm
I love the tones, but I think Frank’s comment is worth considering. If it was me, I’d look at cropping out the big berg on the left and crop down just a bit from the right, maybe to retain the AR. I’d like more focus on the curve(s) of the little bergs in the water, the curve of the deep blue water under the bigger berg, and on that lovely scoop out of the big one. Don’t know if that will make any sense written as it it and I’m glad Russ isn’t here! 😉
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